The posting of number 4 of Green Specter: The Rise of Sutt is a bit wrong. The point when the story diverges into the Winning and Losing Endings is when Green Specter and Specter Girl realize that Hexanna is over 2000 years old(Specter Girl says "DAMN! You're boobs aren't that saggy after 2000 years." After which Hexanna says, "Not helping!" The Winning Ending starts with Hexanna saying "He's got the home court advantage. I'm losing it here!" Green Specter responds with, "Don't worry! This Specter flash bang should distract him!" The Winning Ending ends with Hexanna saying, "The Heart of Anubis. The Skull Crystal and Sutt's staff. Safe in my inner sanctum. Hopefully they won't cause anymore trouble. With all this junk maybe I need to have a garage sale." The Losing Ending begins with Hexanna being blasted by Sutt's staff with a loud "KRACKS!" and Sutt shouting, "You're in my house, bitch! Here I own you!" The Losing Ending ends with a picture of Champion Girl, Green Specter, and Specter Girl all pregnant and shackled to a wall. Sutt says "... and the heroines can do NOTHING to stop us." This is followed by some evil laughter from him, "HAHAHAHAHAHA!" I assume you got this story from 8muses.com, so I can tell you what happened:the first file of Green Specter; The Rise of Sutt (which says Part 1-27) contains the full main story plus the first half of the Losing Ending. The second File (which says Part 28-Losing Ending) contains the second half of the Losing Ending. The third file (which says Part 29- Winning Ending) contains the COMPLETE Winning Ending. Hopefully this information will allow you to correct your posting of the story here.
I hate to point this out, but I just noticed that you forget a page in your loading of "Green Specter-The Rise of Sutt". It's page number 290. It shows Sutt explaining to Tuss that the last artifact to collect is the Heart of Anubis. It goes like this: in Sutt's pyramid, he uses his mystic staff to display the artifact & says, "The Heart of Anubis. An artifact of amazing power. You will retrieve this and bring it to me! Let none stand in your way!" Tuss says, "What?! That thing!? It's in the downtown wing of the museum. It's nothing but a worthless paper weight." Sutt responds, "Yes, to the neophyte it is worthless. But to a God like me it has more power than you can imagine! Imagine a vault in which you have no key. It would merely be a useless lump of metal to you." This page goes between the page where Hexanna, while talking to Green Specter, Specter Girl & Champion Girl, she ends her conversation with the words, "If my guess is right the next artifact he needs is...." and the page where Tuss starts her conversation with Sutt with the words, "My king, Green Specter and that tart Champion Girl are nuisance enough but now Hexanna is against us. This could be more difficult for us." It looks like this missing page was supposed to be the beginning of part 4 of your upload to this blog but for some reason it didn't load with the others. That's why there is an empty space (large enough for one image) between the end of the story & the beginning of the comments. I hope you can fix this for everyone.
Yes, it is true that there was an image missing.I have already corrected it.Thank you for warning me and for help again. It allowed readers for the error
The posting of number 4 of Green Specter: The Rise of Sutt is a bit wrong. The point when the story diverges into the Winning and Losing Endings is when Green Specter and Specter Girl realize that Hexanna is over 2000 years old(Specter Girl says "DAMN! You're boobs aren't that saggy after 2000 years." After which Hexanna says, "Not helping!" The Winning Ending starts with Hexanna saying "He's got the home court advantage. I'm losing it here!" Green Specter responds with, "Don't worry! This Specter flash bang should distract him!" The Winning Ending ends with Hexanna saying, "The Heart of Anubis. The Skull Crystal and Sutt's staff. Safe in my inner sanctum. Hopefully they won't cause anymore trouble. With all this junk maybe I need to have a garage sale." The Losing Ending begins with Hexanna being blasted by Sutt's staff with a loud "KRACKS!" and Sutt shouting, "You're in my house, bitch! Here I own you!" The Losing Ending ends with a picture of Champion Girl, Green Specter, and Specter Girl all pregnant and shackled to a wall. Sutt says "... and the heroines can do NOTHING to stop us." This is followed by some evil laughter from him, "HAHAHAHAHAHA!" I assume you got this story from 8muses.com, so I can tell you what happened:the first file of Green Specter; The Rise of Sutt (which says Part 1-27) contains the full main story plus the first half of the Losing Ending. The second File (which says Part 28-Losing Ending) contains the second half of the Losing Ending. The third file (which says Part 29- Winning Ending) contains the COMPLETE Winning Ending. Hopefully this information will allow you to correct your posting of the story here.
ResponEliminaHello,thank you very much for telling me my mistake.In the next few days I will try correct it,sorry.
EliminaThe story is already corrected. Thanks to bigmanhelper for telling me,also I apologize for the mistake with blog readers.
ResponEliminaI'm glad I could help out.
EliminaI hate to point this out, but I just noticed that you forget a page in your loading of "Green Specter-The Rise of Sutt". It's page number 290. It shows Sutt explaining to Tuss that the last artifact to collect is the Heart of Anubis. It goes like this: in Sutt's pyramid, he uses his mystic staff to display the artifact & says, "The Heart of Anubis. An artifact of amazing power. You will retrieve this and bring it to me! Let none stand in your way!" Tuss says, "What?! That thing!? It's in the downtown wing of the museum. It's nothing but a worthless paper weight." Sutt responds, "Yes, to the neophyte it is worthless. But to a God like me it has more power than you can imagine! Imagine a vault in which you have no key. It would merely be a useless lump of metal to you." This page goes between the page where Hexanna, while talking to Green Specter, Specter Girl & Champion Girl, she ends her conversation with the words, "If my guess is right the next artifact he needs is...." and the page where Tuss starts her conversation with Sutt with the words, "My king, Green Specter and that tart Champion Girl are nuisance enough but now Hexanna is against us. This could be more difficult for us." It looks like this missing page was supposed to be the beginning of part 4 of your upload to this blog but for some reason it didn't load with the others. That's why there is an empty space (large enough for one image) between the end of the story & the beginning of the comments. I hope you can fix this for everyone.
ResponElimina
EliminaYes, it is true that there was an image missing.I have already corrected it.Thank you for warning me and for help again. It allowed readers for the error